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thanh_hai
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ID 18726
Date: 03/09/2011
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Mình nhờ các bạn sửa dùm mình bài writing _thanks
Mình đang tự học tiếng anh ở nhà và tập viết những đoaan5 văn với chủ đề đơn giản > Nói chung là mình thấy bài writing của mình nó có vẻ giống tiếng bối nhiều hơn tiếng anh nên mình vào đây mong các bạn có thể góp ý sửa sai cho mình . Mình cảm ơn các bạn nhiều lắm !
I have a sister .She was born four years after I was . She is medium build with round face, thick eyelashes and round , bright , deep eyes. Her straight hair is black and is usually tied in pony tail to keep it from falling onto her face. She is often seen in brightly colored clothes, It makes her more brightness
She is an introverted girl. In the school, she is very quite and seldom joins in outdoor activities. She has few friends . Her world only consist of home, school, homework and television. She isn’t ambitious so she is not a competitive person too. She doesn’t have a real passion on anything so she has never taken effort and time to do something. She often spends most of her time on watching TV , listening to music and others entertainment activities. She doesn’t have a dream or goals for her life. I feel this was a waste of time, a waste of life and so boring but she doesn’t. She is satisfied with everything she has . I have never seen her worries about something like bad marks in the test, her position in class or everything relevant to the studying. She also has never thought about the future , what she will do ? who does she want to become to? Because of her special character , she has a very simple life. Although she isn’t a enthusiastic girl, she is easy- going , clever and creative .She likes cooking and works with computer . She often spend time to discovering all feature of a software or a program of computer. She learns how to use a program very fast . Thought she was younger than me but sometime she was more mature than me about a way of looking at life. My sister and I are very different ,sometime we also bickered with each ohters but she is the one who can understand me and gives me an optimistic outlook towards life . I must be thankful for that.
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