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datpham1984
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ID 18299
Date: 08/30/2010
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Help me to fix the topic
Please help me correct grammar and way writing
Dear my friend
I’m sorry to say that I won’t be able to start for coming a holiday in nha trang with you. I hope that you doesn’t dissapointed with me . I know you love the sea, so am I . I have travel many place,nhatrang is a place , which have most beautiful beaches that I ever come. I wished I could come Nha trang again!. Your invitation really took me surprised and I thank you very much about it. Although, I'd love to travel with you but I can not at this time . Because my family have only few people and my mother is ill, she is dangerously ill so I can not leave her at this time. I hope you will forgive me on the promise to you, I’m very sorry about that, I sure you’ll be sympathetic
. If you agree, I will invite you to go to their next time , are you ready?. Sure, I'll invite you to come to my uncle's house, and I will invite you to taste a few seafood dishes ,we’ll visit a few of famous places in nhatrang, that have a wonderful trip. I think you will love it.
However,I think You should not miss the trip on Saturday next week, That would be exciting opportunities for you to relax and explore new areas of our country. you can invite a few relatives or friends, I think it will be very interesting! I hope you have a comfortable trip. please reply me after receiving this letter!
Sincerely
Your friend
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harder
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REF: 100288
Date: 10/16/2010
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Hi,
In Vietnamese's assay, the same topic, but we have many ways to write it. English is also the same, further more, English is our second languages and that why I am still learning. This is my view and I hope you may like it. Otherwise, please ignore it.
Dear my friend
I’m sorry I won’t be able to go to a holiday in Nha trang with you. I hope you don’t mind . I know you love the sea, so am I . I have traveled many places, especially, Nha trang is the one of the most beautiful beaches that I ever come. I wish I could come Nha trang again. You know, I was so surprised when I got your invitation. Anyway, I thank you very much for very kind of you. Although I'd love to travel with you, I can not go there at this time. For the reason, my mother is sick and I am the only one to take care of her.
Again, I’m very sorry, and I hope you will forgive me. I am sure you understand me.
As possible as, I would like to invite you to go there next time, especially, my uncle’s house where we will have a great opportunity to taste a few fresh seafood dishes and we also visit some famous places in Nhatrang, which are all wonderful things in our trip, and I think you will love it.
However, I think You should not miss the trip on Saturday next week, That would be exciting opportunities for you to relax and explore new areas of our country. you can invite a few relatives or friends, I think it will be very interesting! I hope you have a comfortable trip. please reply me after receiving this letter!
Sincerely,
Your friend
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