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longcho
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ID 16857
Date: 03/12/2008
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Neighborhood
plzzz correct for me!
My neighborhood is a wonderful place to live.First of all, the weather is very nice. It's so fresh and never too cold or hot. Therefor, people who are living there are very healthy. Secondly, it also a safe place because crime rate is very low. In addition, people are very friendly, kind and funny. They will be really to help you when you get any difficulty in life. Thirdly, life is very moderate there. Everything is cheap and good. So i can save a lot of money since i have lived there. Finally, it is also a traditional area, so there are a lot of festivals there such as Tet holiday, Mid-autumn, Huong pagoda, Hung king festival. i have many memeries about nature and close neighbors. If i must go away, i will nerver forget this place. It is always in my heart.
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Reply:
tayaoxanh
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REF: 98529
Date: 07/01/2008
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Bài viết của bạn khá hấp tấp và hình như, theo mình nghĩ, bạn không đọc lại bài sau khi viết xong thì phải. Mình phát hiện vài lỗi sai sau đây:"Therefor, people...", "...be really to help you...", "...memeries...". Giọng văn còn chập chững, có lẽ bạn viết văn chưa nhiều phải không? Từ Từ rồi bạn sẽ khá hơn, chỉ có một cách nhanh nhất để viết khá, "reading", chăm chỉ hơn thì là "writing".
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